{"id":1697,"date":"2013-05-29T21:04:22","date_gmt":"2013-05-30T01:04:22","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/heather-maclean.com\/?page_id=1697"},"modified":"2016-03-21T16:12:35","modified_gmt":"2016-03-21T16:12:35","slug":"non-fiction-book-proposal-the-competition","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/non-fiction-book-proposal-the-competition\/","title":{"rendered":"<a href=\"http:\/\/heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/writebookproposal\/\"><font color=\"#ed9702\"><u>How To Write a Non-Fiction Book Proposal<\/u><\/font><\/a><br>The Competition"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In this section, choose 3 or 4 works that are competitively similar to yours and summarize them and their success. <\/p>\n<p><strong>Choose Wisely<\/strong><br \/>\nEver watch &#8220;American Idol&#8221; and hear the judges rail on about the importance of &#8220;song selection&#8221;? Same idea here. You don&#8217;t want to pick books that are (heaven forbid) exactly like yours (hopefully there aren&#8217;t any!), or too different, or too successful, or not successful enough. You need books that are competitive foils to yours &#8212; that will help show how your book will go the extra step in satisfying a hungry public.  <\/p>\n<p>Then, explain how your book will be even better.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Keep it classy, San Diego<\/strong><br \/>\nThe trick, of course, is to somehow expose your competitors&#8217; weaknesses without actually bashing them (or their publishers!). In the first proposal I ever wrote, I skewered my competition. I was so embarrassed when my agent told me, &#8220;We are better than that!&#8221; Yikes! Yes, yes we are.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s hard not to get carried away, but here&#8217;s an example of how I&#8217;ve done it successfully:<\/p>\n<ul>\nWith 500,000 copies in print, the #1 <em>New York Times<\/em> bestseller <em>The Sopranos Family Cookbook<\/em> by Allen Rucker (Grand Central Publishing, 2002) established that the market for recipe collections inspired by hit television shows is healthy. The <em>New York Times<\/em> bestselling <em>Skinny Italian<\/em> by Teresa Giudice with Heather Maclean (Hyperion, 2010), based on the TV star&#8217;s family recipes, is in its 4th printing with 126,000 copies, and has just been released internationally. <strong>The Mad Men Cookbook<\/strong> serves up the same 5-star combination of popular character-based storytelling and amazing cuisine with the added appeal of nostalgia. <\/ul>\n<p>Based on my own experience (messing it up), I think this is one of the hardest sections to finesse. Since I don&#8217;t want you to make the same mistakes I did (In my first proposal, I wrote that a competing book had &#8220;a writing style aimed at sixth grade boys&#8221; and &#8220;reads more like a conspiracy-theory blog.&#8221; Ouch.), I&#8217;m going to give you a peek at <a href=\"http:\/\/heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/sample-skinnyitalian\/\">the full Competition section from the proposal for <em>Skinny Italian<\/em> here<\/a>. <\/p>\n<p><strong>Sales Numbers<\/strong><br \/>\nIt can be difficult to find sales information without access to the databases that industry insiders have, but a little Google hunting, and you should be able to come up with some numbers. Numbers are good.<\/p>\n<p>Every year, <em>Publishers Weekly<\/em> releases a list with (somewhat reliable) numbers on the best-selling cookbooks of the year (I say &#8220;somewhat&#8221; because the reporting system for book sales is flawed at best). Here&#8217;s their <a href=\" http:\/\/www.publishersweekly.com\/pw\/by-topic\/industry-news\/bookselling\/article\/55458-big-names-dominated-bestsellers-in-2012.html?utm_source=Publishers+Weekly%27s+Cooking+the+Books&#038;utm_campaign=edba2eff3c-UA-15906914-1&#038;utm_medium=email#cookbooks\" target=\"_blank\">link for Cookbooks in 2012<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Citing Other Books<\/strong><br \/>\nFinally, the correct way to cite other books anywhere in your proposal is as follows: <em>Title Italicized<\/em> by Author&#8217;s Name (Publisher, Year Published). Or: <em>French Women Don\u2019t Get Fat<\/em> by by Mireille Guiliano (Knopf, 2004).<\/p>\n<p><strong>>> NEXT: <a href=\"http:\/\/heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/guide-to-getting-your-own-cookbook-publishedhow-to-write-a-non-fiction-book-proposal-promotion-publicity\/\" title=\"Guide to Getting Your Own Cookbook PublishedHow To Write a Non-Fiction Book Proposal: Promotion &#038; Publicity\">Promotion &#038; Publicity<\/a><\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In this section, choose 3 or 4 works that are competitively similar to yours and summarize them and their success. Choose Wisely Ever watch &#8220;American Idol&#8221; and hear the judges rail on about the importance of &#8220;song selection&#8221;? Same idea&#8230; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/non-fiction-book-proposal-the-competition\/\">Continue Reading &rarr;<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"parent":0,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/1697"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1697"}],"version-history":[{"count":12,"href":"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/1697\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3286,"href":"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/1697\/revisions\/3286"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.heather-maclean.com\/heathermacleancooks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1697"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}